Firemanes' Zeal {R/W}{R/W}{R/W}{R/W}
Instant (R)
Firemanes' Zeal deals 4 damage to target attacking or blocking creature. If RRRR was spent to cast Firemanes' Zeal, it deals 2 damage to any number of other target attacking or blocking creatures. If WWWW was spent to cast Firemanes' Zeal, you gain 4 life and creatures you control gain lifelink until end of turn.
Fun! I dig the idea to reward mono decks and the fully hybrid effect. I'd add "to
each of any number of other" for clarity.
Thoughtnapping 2BB
Sorcery {R}
This spell can't be countered.
Target opponent reveals their hand. You choose a permanent card from it. Exile that card. If UR was spent to cast this spell, create a token that's a copy of that card.
Oooh, I like this. All the previous R permanent clones have added haste, so that might've been a nice touch. Otherwise,
UU seems a more natural choice for the extra cost, though of course that'd depend on the environment.
Otherside Amulet
Artifact
When Otherside Amulet enters the battlefield, if was spent to cast it, create a 1/1 white Spirit creature token with flying.
When Otherside Amulet enters the battlefield, if was spent to cast it, create a 1/1 black Shade creature token with menace.
Sacrifice Otherside Amulet: Target token creature you control gets +2/+1 until end of turn. Regenerate it.
Whenever a nontoken creature you control dies, you may exile it from your graveyard. If you do, return Otherside Amulet from your graveyard to your hand.
I get what you're going for, but this is just too many abilities. It's also missing rarity, which would be a problem because it doesn't feel rare but would have to be for its level of complexity.
Blazing Fists 2R
Instant (U)
Target creature you control deals damage equal to its power to any target.
Adamant — If at least three red mana was spent to cast this spell, it has rebound.
"I think it's time to introduce these thugs to my two friends: fire and brimstone."
—Varija Janak, Firefist sergeant
I like the design. Nice shields down moment to let the opponent eliminate the big guy so they don't get hit twice.
Alchemist's Bolt 2R
Instant (Uncommon)
Alchemist's Bolt deals 3 damage to any target.
If W was spent to cast Alchemist's Bolt, it has lifelink.
If B was spent to cast Alchemist's Bolt, it has deathtouch.
Nice, simple, playful.
Zeal Dancer 1G
Creature — Elemental (Uncommon)
When Zeal Dancer enters the battlefield, if R was spent to cast it, create a 1/1 red Elemental creature token with haste. If W was spent to cast it, put a +1/+1 counter on each creature you control. (Do both if RW was spent.)
Evoke 1RW (You may cast this spell for its evoke cost. If you do, it's sacrificed when it enters the battlefield.)
March to the beat of your own drum.
2/1
Heh, neato!
Hipolitia, the Deemer 2w
Legendary Creature - Angel Advisor (m)
Flying
When Hipolitia, the Deemer enters the battlefield, destroy all other permanents with converted mana cost 3 or greater if wubrg was spent to cast it.
3/3
There's no way on the card to cast this for
wubrg, so this only works with
Jodah, Archmage Eternal/other shenanigans. Maybe that was your intention.
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